mary jane venom rough

Here was my first rough sketch attempt at a mary jane venom commission Im working on, it got rejected so I figured Id post it here. I still need to change some things on it design wise for the symbiote and the hair but hey this is the second female symbiote drawing Ive ever done so theres still a lot of experimenting going on. I guess now its back to the drawing board to come with something closer to what the client is looking for now